The Ancients Stirred Nano Cover #2

So this year I'm making my first attempt at Nanowrimo (National Novel Writing Month), the goal of which is to write a 50,000 word novel in one month. So in preparation for November, I took a shot at designing a cover for my novel. I'm not 100% sold on the title yet, but it's functional. I'm trying to portray a light, like from a diver's flashlight, falling on this old relic. Did I manage it? Here's version #1: daftpirate.deviantart.com/art/… if you'd like to offer an opinion on which works better.